Re-read your writing from this week. Can you edit it and make improvements? Use your mild/ spicy or hot challenge from each day to help you focus on what you need to include.
Is there any conversation? If so, what punctuation do you need to include? Have you remembered capital letter and full-stops and does your writing make sense?
Perhaps you can add a simile (as sharp as a knife) or a fronted adverbial (Slowly.....Carefully.....Quickly.....After a while.......In a flash ........?)
Try to read it aloud to someone else and ask them what they enjoyed the most about it?
Is it better than the beginning / ending that the author gave us?
Today focuses on adding money. Watch the video remember to stop it and have a go at the tasks.
Ocean Curriculum - Science
The National Marine Aquarium are continuing their live lessons. This week's theme is 'Nautical Navigation', and you can watch episode 3 here. It is being shown live at 1pm, but don't worry if you miss it, you can catch up on the episode, and any others you've missed, any time. The live lessons are connected to the show 'The Deep', which is on CBBC every week day at 12pm. You can catch up on the series so far on BBC iPlayer.
We are carrying on our lessons with Mr Palekar. This week, we are going to be learning about pieces of music with two beats in each bar.
Select a today's PE with Joe video from the playlist.